Showing posts with label Storm-Book3. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Storm-Book3. Show all posts

Wednesday, May 12, 2021

Storm's Gate Featured on the Faerie Review


It was wonderful to see Liliyana Shadowlyn's review of Storm's Gate, Book 3 of the Stormfall Chronicles, earlier today.  To quote briefly from the review:

I’ve enjoyed following Lynette, Baxter and Eirlon over the last two books, and getting to continue their adventures with them has been a delight. . .  
There's a lot on the line, and you'll be turning pages, wanting to know what's coming next. Definitely recommend for fantasy adventure lovers!

So glad she's been enjoying the series. Liliyana's review and website and be found under the links below.

https://www.thefaeriereview.com/2021/05/review-storms-gate/

https://lshadowlynauthor.com/2021/05/12/review-storms-gate/


Friday, March 19, 2021

Designing a Cover: Book 3 of the Stormfall Chronicles

Having completed the first draft for Book 4 of the Stormfall Chronicles, I will soon be launching the cover design for Book 4. This should give my cover designer time to begin working on the cover, in parallel with my edits to the text.

This might therefore be a good opportunity to discuss the cover design process that I've used throughout my novels. My covers usually begin with a very quick, hand-drawn sketch outlining what I'm looking for. It's usually nothing elegant, just a starting point for discussions with my cover artist - who happens to also be my middle daughter. From there, the two of us can discuss what photography she will need to help create the final design.

Each cover that my daughter produces is generated from a series of photographs which she breaks down into the constituent elements and reassembles to produce the final product. Her sisters will often serve as models. For other elements, we'll go on day-trips to state parks or similar sites with camera in hand, looking for inspiration.

The raw photo and processed image compared.
Numerous changes were made to the dress and hair.

For Book 3 for example, she used an image of her younger sister - but had to edit the color of the dress to match the sketch. She also needed to extend the dress' hem, as well as the hair length in the image (her sister had cut her hair shorter between the photo taken for the cover for Book 2 and that taken for Book 3).

The dragon began as a polymer clay figure.

A model for the dragon, in turn, was constructed from polymer clay which was painted to achieve the general tone. After experimenting with a couple of alternatives, we settled on constructing the wings and neck of the dragon separately - to allow us to take photographs at a variety of angles which could then be sorted through, to determine which combination worked best. Working from the photograph, the contours and pose of the dragon and its neck could be adjusted to achieve the desired effect.

Relatively few changes were needed for the tower

The background for Book 3 also required a wall and a tower, for which we made a trip to Castle Craig Tower in Meriden, Connecticut.

The wall image was mirrored for the cover

Built as a scenic lookout point, the tower required minimal modification, while the image of the wall had to be mirrored to fit in with the overall design. Similarly, the courtyard surface required a trip to a local landscape retailer to collect working images for the stone paving.


The flames were likewise reconstructed from actual flame images, captured at night. The color contrast was then adjusted to match the tones in the sketch.

There were a lot of fine details which needed to be added or adjusted to get the image right: smoke; lightning bolts; shadows; and texturing. The most crucial part, however, was the lighting. Getting the color and lighting just right to resemble the illumination from a flaming background was no small feat - and something which my daughter had to research on her own and figure out how to do.

Getting the lighting right was essential to achieving the final design

Once the image was complete, it was passed through a filter to arrive at the final, "oil-painting" style. The cover lettering and framing color could then be added once everything else was done.

Assembling the cover was another great part of working with my daughters on these books. Together with beta-reading the final drafts, the cover design was another chapter which I will sorely miss when my two eldest children leave for their respective universities next fall.


Sunday, February 21, 2021

Beebliophiles' Review for Storm's Gate


I was excited to see Bee's review for Storm's Gate appear this past weekend. I'll borrow just a short quote from their review:

One of my favourite elements was when we switched to a viewpoint not seen for a while, for example Kalden, who we hadn’t seen since the previous book. It’s like meeting an old friend, catching up, seeing what’s going on in his life.

I had been looking forward to reintroducing Kalden since the end of Book 1, and am glad that others felt the same way too. Bee's complete review appears under the link below.

https://beebliophile.com/2021/02/21/storms-gate-review/

I really do appreciate the thoughtful comments from all of my reviewers. Thanks again Bee.

Monday, December 28, 2020

Review for Book 3 of the Stormfall Chronicles


It was great to see a review for Book 3 of the Stormfall Chronicles posted on Amazon and Goodreads this past weekend - this time by avid book reader and blogger Paige Green.

Thanks again Paige. Your thoughtful insights are always appreciated.

Friday, December 4, 2020

Stormfall Chronicles Book Reel 2

I've been having a little fun with book trailers, ever since the release of the third book in the Stormfall Chronicles. Many thanks again to my middle daughter who's responsible for my cover designs.

Thursday, November 19, 2020

Monday, November 2, 2020

Updated Character List - Book 3

I have updated the combined Character List for the Stormfall Chronicles - which now includes Book 1 through the upcoming Book 3. The updated list also includes pronunciation guides for each of the names. I will be including a truncated copy of the list as part of the end material for the third book.

Thanks again to all of my readers. The release of Book 3 is coming soon.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_N3VCDJ-dFocD7ObKbnbg3Ork2cp_YvK

Saturday, October 31, 2020

Status Update - Book 3: Seventh Draft Complete

Edits from my beta-readers are finally complete. It took longer than I had anticipated, slowed by my daughters' (beta-readers') classroom commitments - but I'm glad that it's finally done.

Between the sixth and seventh drafts, the book grew from 134,000 to 136,000 words. I can finally begin to format the novel and send out ARC editions. Can't wait to see it in print.

Thursday, October 29, 2020

Featured in "Just a Spell" Reading Series

It was such a pleasure to be featured on Lou Britt's "Just a Spell" series tonight, alongside two other wonderful fantasy authors - K.M. Bishop and Charlotte Murphy. I read a snippet from the third book in the Stormfall Chronicles.



Thanks again Lou!

Thursday, October 22, 2020

Cover Reveal: Stormfall Chronicles Book 3

 I'm so excited to finally release the cover design for Book 3 of the Stormfall Chronicles. Storm's Gate goes live on Amazon on November 19th.

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B08CNNJBBD

Many thanks again to my daughter, Liron for all of her hard work in putting it together.


A world descending into war; a fabled healer who might be their last, best hope; and a princess imprisoned in a dragon-guarded keep.

Lynette sets out with Baxter and Eirlon in search of a healer: the fabled Medicine Man of Horru. It is a desperate gamble to revive the fae king and avert a larger war.

But the route they take will prove perilous. They risk losing everything, even each other, in a world gone mad with the stirrings of war. Armies have gathered on the borders of the Feyfell – lured by legends of fae wealth. With King Elyan poisoned and unconscious, the kingdom is visible, and vulnerable to outside invaders for the first time in centuries. And while the fae nobles debate rules of succession, Princess Elise remains missing.

For in a tower a world away, the fae princess is held captive, surrounded by armies and a dragon chained to the will of vengeful sorceress. Drained of her magic, Elise must plot her own escape – while a new breed of assassins hunts the mage-turned-swordsman named Garth. Werewolves prowl the land again, as all alike seek to strike their bargains before the oncoming war.

Will it be too much for Lynette to bear? Can she survive the loss of so much she holds dear? And if she does, will she ever be the same? For who among them would dare ascend, to retrieve hope from a dragon-guarded keep.

Monday, October 19, 2020

Counting the Days to Book 3

I'm now one month away from the launch date for the third book in the Stormfall Chronicles. Things are starting to come together and deadlines are coming on fast.


I am, however, looking forward to the cover unveiling later this week.

Sunday, September 6, 2020

Status Update - Book 3: Sixth Draft Complete

It has taken longer than I had anticipated to assemble and incorporate the edits from my beta-readers. Part of the struggle was working around my daughters' schedules for school work and other activities. In the past, I was able to have my beta readers working in series: one would read through the entire draft, I'd incorporate their edits, then the next one would read. This year there's been a lot of overlap between each edit.

So I've finally reached the milestone where I can say that one of my beta-readers finished and all of their edits have been incorporated. For lack of anything better, I'll refer to this as the 6th draft. The word count has grown from 133,000 for the 5th draft, to 134,000 today. Some words and paragraphs needed to be added, some removed - but overall a small change. My other two daughters (who are also beta-reading the book) are coming along right behind.

Sunday, July 12, 2020

Storm's Gate - Book 3 of the Stormfall Chronicles - Now in Pre-Release

Storm's Gate, Book 3 of the Stormfall Chronicles, is now available in pre-release - with a scheduled release date of 19 Nov 2020. An interim blurb has been released as well:
A world descending into war; a fabled healer who might be their last, best hope; and a princess, locked in a tower, guarded by a dragon.
Lynette sets out with Baxter and Eirlon in search of a healer: the fabled Medicine Man of Horru. It is a desperate gambit to revive the fae king and avert a larger war.
But the route they take will prove perilous. They risk losing everything, even each other, in a world gone mad with the stirrings of war. Armies have gathered on the borders of the Feyfell – lured by legends of fae wealth. With King Elyan poisoned and unconscious, the kingdom is visible, and vulnerable to outside invaders for the first time in centuries. And while the fae nobles debate rules of succession, Princess Elise remains missing.
Will it all be too much for Lynette to bear? Will she survive the loss of what she holds dear – and if she does, will she ever be the same? For who among them would dare descend into the realm of the undead, to retrieve a princess from a dragon-guarded tower?
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B08CNNJBBD
I'm expecting to have the Cover Reveal in September, which is when I'm also expecting to have ARC editions available.

The latest draft for Book 3 is with my beta readers now, and I've also added a couple of scenes to Book 4 - which should complete the current story arc. Looking forward to seeing Book 3 in print.

Tuesday, May 26, 2020

The Stage Presence of a Great Villain

One of the job hazards of being a fiction author is wanting to talk about the characters who make up our novels, and not being able to do so for fear of giving away spoilers.

This weekend I received my first beta-reader feedback for the beginning of Book 3 in the Stormfall Chronicles.

There are a couple of important characters who become introduced or fleshed out in the third novel. One of them has been one of my favorite villains to portray. It's delightful to finally get my first beta-reader feedback, and receive confirmation that the villain really did live up to the intended impact. I'm so looking forward to introducing them to my broader, reader audience.

Sunday, May 24, 2020

Status Update - Book 3: Fifth Draft Complete

Just completed my fifth draft for Book 3 of the Stormfall Chronicles. In parallel, my middle daughter (who is also my first beta-reader), has already begun reviewing the first chapters.

The word count has grown from 132,000 words at completion of the fourth draft, to 133,000 words for the fifth draft.

Time to start thinking about cover designs as well.

Friday, May 8, 2020

Status Update - Book 3: Fourth Draft Complete

I have completed my fourth draft for Book 3 of the Stormfall Chronicles. The word count has grown from 128,000 words at completion of the third draft, to 132,000 words now.

At this point, I'm pretty satisfied with the general flow and story line for the book, although it will still require some polishing.

Rather than completing another front-to-back proof-read and re-edit of the book, before handing any chapters off to my beta-readers, I'm currently leaning towards handing-off copies on a chapter-by-chapter basis throughout the fifth edit cycle. In other words, the fifth edit would occur concurrently with the first beta-read of the book.

Looking forward to it.

Saturday, April 18, 2020

Status Update - Book 3: Third Draft Complete

Finally finished working my way through the third draft to Book 3 of the Stormfall Chronicles. The word count grew modestly from 122,000 words when I finished the second draft to 128,000 words now.

Still a lot more polishing which needs to go into it, before I'm ready to start releasing chapters to my beta-readers.

Tuesday, April 7, 2020

Out for A Walk

I'm just past the half-way point with editing my third draft of Book 3.

This past weekend my middle daughter and I went on a nature hike, looking for material to inspire the cover design for the third novel. The birds were singing, heralding spring - even if the trees didn't yet resemble it.

The park trail where we went was pretty much deserted.

For those who don't already know, my middle daughter is also my cover designer for each of the books.

Sunday, March 22, 2020

Status Update - Book 3: Second Draft Complete

I've finally finished editing the second draft for Book 3 of the Stormfall Chronicles. A lot of scenes needed to be added to flesh out the novel, which grew from 98,000 words at the completion of the first draft, to 122,000 words at completion of the second.

I had originally thought the third book would be a little shorter - more similar to the first book. In accomplishing everything I had intended for this story-arc, however, it definitely needed to grow. There is still a lot of editing left to perform, but there are already scenes that I'm in love with. Can't wait to polish it a little more so that my beta-readers can review it.